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26/10/2012

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How I died

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In the spirit of Halloween, we are embracing all things dead. Write a story whose last line is "...and that is how I died" You can submit your story as a comment. 
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Clare and Niamh
26/10/2012 02:39:29

How i died
“Sup homme slice! Ya’ll bouncin down the yellow brick road?”
“Naaah man , that crazy stuff happenin all up in dat.”
“ awh g-daawg don’t be wussin ou bro.”
Aight man ,what ever you say fam,let bounce”

As we strolled down to the yellow brick road , we spotted our homme daaawgs chilling by the river.When we bounced over ,they were tripping .We convienced them to come with us.
Snoop dog wanted to take the short cut, as the leader we followed him. we soon found out the short cut wasn’t what it seemed.
We got halfways through the short cut when everything went wrong. Snoop dog went missing. Jay-Z lost his leg. Kanye West went running screaming like a girl. Dr. Dre got chewed up and spat back out. As I (50 cent) went around eatin 10 cents ,I seen a shadowy figure behind me.

I turned to find out it was a 1 euro. He opened his big mouth and flipped me inside him and that my bro’s is how i died.

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Christy
26/10/2012 02:39:39




It was a dark night. The weather was terrible.The wind , blowing against the leaves of the trees.The rain , hitting roofs like a bullets from a gun. We were drunk. Every last one of us intoxicated to the max. The party was getting to it’s going home stage and everybody was trying to find their way home. I guess alcohol brings bad things on people. They always have bad ideas and never think of the consequences.
The glow of yellow light as taxis neared the location. People shared fares to get home. Home was far away from this abandoned contryside. We knew the journey was far and for us who decided to spend all our money on alcohol we had to take a risk .
The engine started . The drunk driver behind the wheel. We started are descent from the top of the mountain to the town. The road turning and bending. There were of five of us in the car. It was fun , everybody was joking and talking about the party . I was having a great drunken conversation to my friend beside me . Suddenly i swing my head around , tree!!. Silence.A scream of agony. This is when i died.

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Alison and Neil
26/10/2012 02:40:27

Alison and Neil’s idea of.. and that's how i died.. dun dun dunnnnnnn

Once upon a time in a far away kingdom I lived with my husband Neil. We had everything we ever wanted, a big house, plenty of little children running around (little munchkins) as they were called. One thing we lacked of was a sense of humour and someone to share that sense of humour with, this meaning friends.
One lovely, bright, sunny Monday morning we set out into the forest to fetch some fire wood for later on that evening. We were half way through the forest when they found a shocking discovery.. There was a piece of robe hanging from a tree, we did not know where it came from or how it got up so high. This left us in concern. There was someone here Neil said, but where and who I thought in the back of my mind. So we decided to take a walk around the forest path to see if whoever was there had left any evidence or if they had dropped anything. We came across a scarf in which was pink and purple with red polka dots. It smelled very strongly of womens perfume so strongly that they started to see things. On closer inspection of the scarf they noticed it wasnt really red polka dots it was splatters of blood.
Suddenly we heard a ruffling noise behind them, we jumped in our skin. “Anyone there”, I shouted. Neil started to feel very uncomfortable and scared. The noise was all around them now. Maybe there was more than one person..or thing.
I noticed something in the bush and went to examine it, as I was doing this a big old wrinkly smelly chinese man jumped out and grapped the scarf out of neils hand and wrapped it so tightly around his neck his whole face turned purple within a few seconds. I heard him try scream but he could not. I seen the blood disappear from his face. He was gone I did not know what to do. My knight in shining armour was gone. My heart felt like someone just ripped it out of my chest and stamped on it.
The old man was gone.. but for how long? I started to make my way back to my house to make a call to tell my family about the devastating news. While doing this I seen a scary black man standing in front of my door waiting for my return with a bloody knife in his hand. What did i ever do to deserve this. My children were in danger. He walked towards me to and he thrust the knife into my chest. I felt relief but then again that is how I died.

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Algirde
26/10/2012 03:19:16

How I died

I was walking trough the dark, scary woods after i had been told that I’m not god enough to be alive by my own parents. I kept on walking and walking when i got lost. I was terrified because it’s the night and people have died in these woods. As I walking, trying to find my way out I heard something behind a bush. I stoped and looked. I was scared not knowing what is behind it. As i stood there a rabbit jumped out causing me to jump back. I let out a sight of relief that it was just a ribbit.

I kept on walking trough the woods when i heard footsteps. I looked behind me and there stood a figure. A tall, skinny figure. This made me scared. I wasn’t sure what was going to happen next. The figure began to walk towwards me and I froze. It came closer and closer. When the figure was close enough I realised it was a ghost. It was a boy. He looked fifteen or sixteen.

I wasn’t sure what I was more scared off, the fact that i can see a ghost or what is going to happen now. I looked closely at him and realised that it was a boy from our school who died. To be exact he was killed, by a group of popular kids. His name was George. He looked at me with sad and painful eyes. It seemed like he knew what had happened. He looked down and i could see him holding a rose. A red rose. He reached out for my hand and put the rose in my palm. I was surprised that I could feel his hand. I always thought ghost aren’t real or anyone can see them yet alone feel them. This was just like a dream, not real. Soon i felt sharp pain in my back.

I started to lose my breath and i could feel my heart beating slower and slower. I fell to the ground and I could feel something running down my back. I layed on my side and felt someone sitting near me whisprening ‘’ everything will be ok, ill be here with you and always will be’’ my eyes shut started to shut and thats when i realised that was the day that I died. In the woods with George by my side.

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Keeva
26/10/2012 03:19:56

How I died

I was walking trough the dark, scary woods after i had been told that I’m not god enough to be alive by my own parents. I kept on walking and walking when i got lost. I was terrified because it’s the night and people have died in these woods. As I walking, trying to find my way out I heard something behind a bush. I stoped and looked. I was scared not knowing what is behind it. As i stood there a rabbit jumped out causing me to jump back. I let out a sight of relief that it was just a ribbit.

I kept on walking trough the woods when i heard footsteps. I looked behind me and there stood a figure. A tall, skinny figure. This made me scared. I wasn’t sure what was going to happen next. The figure began to walk towwards me and I froze. It came closer and closer. When the figure was close enough I realised it was a ghost. It was a boy. He looked fifteen or sixteen.

I wasn’t sure what I was more scared off, the fact that i can see a ghost or what is going to happen now. I looked closely at him and realised that it was a boy from our school who died. To be exact he was killed, by a group of popular kids. His name was George. He looked at me with sad and painful eyes. It seemed like he knew what had happened. He looked down and i could see him holding a rose. A red rose. He reached out for my hand and put the rose in my palm. I was surprised that I could feel his hand. I always thought ghost aren’t real or anyone can see them yet alone feel them. This was just like a dream, not real. Soon i felt sharp pain in my back.

I started to lose my breath and i could feel my heart beating slower and slower. I fell to the ground and I could feel something running down my back. I layed on my side and felt someone sitting near me whisprening ‘’ everything will be ok, ill be here with you and always will be’’ my eyes shut started to shut and thats when i realised that was the day that I died. In the woods with George by my side.

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Janet
26/10/2012 03:20:56

HOW I DIED
It was just a normal day. Ms Green was watering her plants, Mr Gates was yelling at his dog and I was on my way to school. My exspetations for the day was nothing as it had turned out.

I reached the end of the road and was about to cross when i heard a scream, which sounded like Mayella, Mr Ewell’s daughter. I ran over to there house where the scream came from and bagged in the door. I went traight into the living room where Mayella was laying on the floor in tears.

I asked her what was wrong and she said she had been attacked by a stranger who had just broke into the house. She tried to stop him but she could’nt. I immediatly picked up the phone and called the police to tell them about the incident, they said they would be down as fast as they could.

I bent down to help Mayella up when I felt a sudden sharp pain in the center of my back. I rapidly fell to the growned as Heard the loud scream of Mayella. I began to feel my heart slowly die out. I could hear the voices of the people around me but it slowly died out. Suddenly my heart stopped. I found my self in a queue behind about a few thousand people. The queue got shorter by the second. Before i knew it i was at the top of the queue.

There was a bright biming light in forst of me, so bright that i could not help but to turn away. As i turned to the side i saw a screan with scenes from my life, EVERYTHING!, from the start right to the end. I was not sure what it was. I was so confused. I turned to the front to try and get a glimps of where the light was coming from but i just couldn’t.

I heard a loud voice saying ‘ I AM THE LORD YOUR GOD, THROUGH YOUR LIFE SHE HAVE DONE NOTHING BUT SERVE ME, YOU SHALL BE AWARDED!’. Suddenly i was in a bright place. This place was completly white, every one was wearing white, even me. I stopped a young woman who was walking and singing songs of praises and ask her where i was, she replied ‘ YOU ARE IN HEAVEN’.

‘AND THAT IS HOW I DIED’!

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Drew
26/10/2012 05:29:02

How I Died!

Waking up, getting ready to head out to school. I’m thinking of how to treat this slow day. It’s the Friday before mid-term none of my friends are in school and anyone else decent enough to talk to didn’t bother to come in. Imagine my luck...

As I walk to the bus stop, freezing from the cold, I wonder if ‘’is going to snow this year’’, simply because I felt a drop of silt on my forehead. The bus arrives preferably late that day, if you knew me by now you would know that i #HATE !! Waiting, especially in the freezing cold with three bags on my back. As i look outside the window of the bus i point my attention towards the the other secondary school, and realise there is barely anyone there.

I’m in school looking around for someone worth talking to. Then my friend neil comes in! Oh i jumped for joy i made should have been recorded on a camera or something! He came to me with an amazing idea too. ‘’Drew let’s go on the mitch and get a few beurs out n go on the town?’’ said neil. Now imagine your friend said that to you wouldn’t that be amazing? So like any Normal teenager i said yes, and with that we left the school.

As we leave, we technically didn’t mitch, so to say, we just didn’t go into school. We called the women and me and neil headed down to the Scotch Hall to meet up with them. I was very nervous as it my first time going on the sly from school, i felt like such a rebel, but my rebellion was short lived as when we got to the bottom of the school hill we were spotted by our year head, driving into school. She straight away stopped, rolled down the window and said ‘’Schools that way boys’’, stuck for words we bowed our heads in shame, caught lovely. She said ‘’get in the car’’
My mother was called in, i was suspended...This Is How I Died.

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