In the comments section, I want you to pretend that you are one of the star-crossed lovers. Write a diary entry, in which you pour your heart out. Let your troubles melt away and hopefully we can rewrite this ending!
Romeo and Juliet is a tragic tale of love and loss. I cannot help but think that if Romeo and Juliet had just hashed out their problems with others, things may have turned out differently.
In the comments section, I want you to pretend that you are one of the star-crossed lovers. Write a diary entry, in which you pour your heart out. Let your troubles melt away and hopefully we can rewrite this ending!
31 Comments
Igor
28/2/2013 06:47:49
Dear Diary,
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Jasmine Ceyler
30/4/2013 11:22:09
After reading all of these comments I like yours the best. It is very moving and so down to detain.
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Ashley
30/10/2013 15:11:05
Good Job ! (:
cjdskgn
23/2/2014 13:25:03
good
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aodhan
28/2/2013 06:49:14
Today I went to a party and I saw to most beautiful girl in the whole world. I never saw her before .the next day I asked her to marry me she said yes but there was a catch she was a Capulet that’s the people we hate the most but she is a angle she would never harm a fly. the only way we can get married is is secretly because my father wouldn’t allow me to marry her just because she is a Capulet .I think we should all just keep the Pease because I truly love her. I think the only way we would be able to go places together and love each other would be in heaven where nobody could harm me or her.
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buky
28/2/2013 06:49:24
Romeo and Juliet
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Dylan D
28/2/2013 06:52:07
Juliet
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Nila
23/9/2015 20:26:16
absolutely right? you are so good at writing PEE paragraph... i hope you got a higher grade in your gcse... keep up your good work?
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andrew
28/2/2013 06:52:12
Romeo
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Dylan Byrne
28/2/2013 06:53:09
Romeo’s Diary Entry
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Olly
3/7/2015 03:18:34
superb! you really touched my heart and it even made me cry, thank you for enlightening my life like you have
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calvin
28/2/2013 06:54:10
DEAR DIARY
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Sarah
28/2/2013 06:54:53
Oh Romeo... Where is he ... Where is my Romeo? I’m sad , I’m lonely , confused and weak. I need my Romeo , my husband. I feel angry knowing that there is people out there after him trying to kill him. I know he didn’t mean to pull the trigger! I know he was upset and angry. But I still love and miss my Romeo. I feel uncompleted. I feel like a jigsaw with a missing piece. I wish we could just be together again. I wish we could live a nice peaceful life with no one bugging us. He is a sweet innocence boy who did nothing wrong. I just wish I could hold his hand again and run my fingers through is thick soft hair. I just want to run! Run far away from all this mess. I need Romeo. I ask where is he hiding but I never get an answer because they know I would run there. I always lie in bed wondering what he is doing now is he even thinking about me I wonder. We could have a future together if I told my parents we were married but also if I tell them it might go the other way like they don’t care about my happiness they would still go after Romeo they would be mad at me. They would hurt me. I feel like they hate me like they want me to be perfect but I’m not! I am who I am but I not the same since Romeo is gone. I won’t be the same till he is back.! Bye for now.
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Chloe
16/12/2013 10:10:31
Wow this is really good! What scene is it about?
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Blathin
28/2/2013 06:56:58
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courtney
26/11/2013 02:03:01
I love it think its really good and has helped me with my work thank you.
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Malika
1/7/2014 11:49:31
it is amazing
Chloe
16/12/2013 10:12:04
Wow this is really good! What scene is this from?
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olamide
28/2/2013 06:58:04
Dear diary
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Ashley
30/10/2013 15:12:33
Good Job To All !
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abigail
17/3/2014 11:57:26
That is a very well dkne for reading all of the comments that they have said
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abigail
17/3/2014 11:55:24
Today I could not stop thinking about this most beautiful girl in the world called juliet and I meet her at a party that I sent to and I did not want to leave when the other people that had come and I jumped out if the car and went back tk see the woman of my life and then j fell in the swimming pool they had and then some gards came in and I had to hide behind this wall in the swimming pool and then we kissed and then she had to go so I said a powem to her and then she jummped back in and then we kissed again then she had to go and so did I
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asfg
4/5/2014 08:03:54
that was really good
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Farah
1/11/2015 20:27:37
english homework
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Jasmine
7/2/2016 21:29:18
Dear Diary,
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