Ms Cullen's English Class - Ms Heeney's Class

Andrew - Call of the Wild

21/1/2013

Here is Andrew's excellent poem ;)

I journeyed to Africa on a research trip
With sweat dripping off my upper lip
I was in a small place in the Kenyan town
With the heat so bad I had the windows down
I heard a slight scream in the bushes ahead
I thought it was a person but it was a lion cub instead
He was very hurt and I saw a bone
So I picked him up and brought him home
He grew up from a little child
Then I released him into the wild

12 Comments

Sarah

23/1/2013 06:00:00 am

I really like this poem ! Its very creative and good :)

Dylan Byrne

23/1/2013 06:01:05 am

I liked the way Andrew made you picture of everything from the trip to Kenyan to the lion that was hurt and how he took care of it.

Joe

23/1/2013 06:01:29 am

Andrew I love your poem you can see there was alot of effort but in to it. Hope you keep up your excellent work :)

Karolina

23/1/2013 06:01:51 am

Great description! Really good rhyming too ;) Good work.

Chloe

23/1/2013 06:02:06 am

Very good poem and clever to really enjoyed reading it :)

Alice Tejaya

23/1/2013 06:02:20 am

Very creative !

olivia

23/1/2013 06:02:46 am

this one is great!:)

Dylan D

23/1/2013 06:04:46 am

This is the way that a true poem should be wrote, I feel like i`m in Africa saving a wild cub. I LOVE IT!

Lija

24/1/2013 06:34:38 am

This is brilliant! Can imagine it vividly in my head as I read every sentence

amy

24/1/2013 06:47:03 am

Your poem is amazing. It really puts a good image in your head

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15/6/2013 12:44:00 am

Wow! Awesome creativity. It seems someone has composed a interesting story into few words which can be expanded more and more.
Good job!

Andrew - Call of the Wild

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